Robotnik's fat floppied corpse drooped down on the floor, his mustache being eaten by a searing sea of hyper realistic ravens poking his dead eyes out of their sockets, dragging the brain out of the foolish fool of a doctor who only mustered his brainpower to stop Sonic, that infernal hedgehog, who speeded around the floor aimlessly as the blood of the doctor filled the floor, making it slippery like an ice stage.
Instead, most people write in horribly obsessive detail every little point so that we get sentences like '.and Dr. I'd say most creepypastas are bad because most people writing them don't get that horror typically works better when you leave the reader fill out the blanks and let their imagination fill the void of the horror that's being described.
